Hi, J
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear j,
Hello!
I have heared "Hello, Good Afternoon!" at 1:20 pm accurate in the past two months.
And I am happy during talking times because I was able to escape from the my difficult problems at "that time".
I can talk with foreigner because You understand my words better.
So I am very grateful to you.
I will register the class in December again, resting a month.
Then I hope you to be my teacher.
Thank, my Teacher.
Hello!
I have heared "Hello, Good Afternoon!" at 1:20 pm accurate in the past two months.
And I am happy during talking times because I was able to escape from the my difficult problems at "that time".
I can talk with foreigner because You understand my words better.
So I am very grateful to you.
I will register the class in December again, resting a month.
Then I hope you to be my teacher.
Thank, my Teacher.
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