Tell me about yourself
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My name is Keum Yu-Hwan, and I am 41 years old.
Graduated from Kyungpook National University in Daegu and majored Embedded Linux.
Currently working as a Senior Engineer at Samsung SDS.
My company is located in Jamsil, and I have been working there for four years.
Samsung SDS ranks top in the business of System Integration(SI) in the Korea,
and i'm very proud that i'm work for the company.
Recently developing mobile security solutions.
I have a very meaningful project, the project is proud to be involved.
Has been married for twelve years, 11-year-old son and 9-year-old daughter.
My wife is a nurse working at a hospital closer to home.
Our families often go camping and fishing.
I like to lure fishing, Families can spend a good time with.
Mainly largemouth bass, rockfish, flatfish catches
Caught fish like to eat with the family.
For me camping and fishing with family in their time of healing.
Graduated from Kyungpook National University in Daegu and majored Embedded Linux.
Currently working as a Senior Engineer at Samsung SDS.
My company is located in Jamsil, and I have been working there for four years.
Samsung SDS ranks top in the business of System Integration(SI) in the Korea,
and i'm very proud that i'm work for the company.
Recently developing mobile security solutions.
I have a very meaningful project, the project is proud to be involved.
Has been married for twelve years, 11-year-old son and 9-year-old daughter.
My wife is a nurse working at a hospital closer to home.
Our families often go camping and fishing.
I like to lure fishing, Families can spend a good time with.
Mainly largemouth bass, rockfish, flatfish catches
Caught fish like to eat with the family.
For me camping and fishing with family in their time of healing.
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