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Unit9: part 5. Propose a solution

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Hello, Larry Johnson.
This is Sam calling from JPJ HR Company.
You want to apply a position to your current employees to refer qualified engineering professionals.
your company have taken on several new projects at least five new engineers over next couple of months to work on and have to hire at least five new engineers.
But your company can't find related qualification.
I will propose to your company can hire new employees. In the first time, I will send your new qualified engineers list. If I feed back for your company position candidates, you choose a qualified people.
If you have a question, pls call me.
Thanks for your calling.
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Hello, Larry Johnson. This is Sam calling from JPJ HR Company. You want to apply a position to your current employees to refer qualified engineering professionals. your company have taken on several new projects at least five new engineers over next couple of months to work on and have to hire at least five new engineers. But your company can't find related qualification. I will propose to your company can hire new employees. In the first time, I will send your new qualified engineers list. If I feed back for your company position candidates, you choose a qualified people. If you have a question, pls call me. Thanks for your calling.

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Hello Mr. Johnson,  this is Sam calling from JPJ HR Company.  In response to your request to help find at least five new qualified engineering professionals to hire in your company, I respectfully submit to you the following proposal.  I will send you a new qualified engineers list. If I feedback for your company position candidates, you choose a qualified people. If you have a question, pls call me. Thanks for your calling.

 

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