Who am i ?(Introducing myself and my family)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, my name is Seok-yun Park. Please call me June briefly. 38 years old. Now I work as manager at start-up business incubating center. My core role is counsulting start-up company.(especially sales method).
I have been married for five years. I have a cuty four-year-old girl whose name's Gee-one.
These days, I and my wife are into joining in festivals at our hometown.We join in festivals every saturday, I think it's very useful educationally for my girl. So i don't have enough free time, but it's my pleasure.
I have been married for five years. I have a cuty four-year-old girl whose name's Gee-one.
These days, I and my wife are into joining in festivals at our hometown.We join in festivals every saturday, I think it's very useful educationally for my girl. So i don't have enough free time, but it's my pleasure.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!