exercise

I like to work out with my colleague Mr. yu at Top heath club near my office. I usually work out there 3~4 times a week. 3~4 people work there. They wear uniform and They are very kind and friendly. There is divided into two floors. There are many treadmills and stationary bikes on the first floor. Many men usually use them. There are many treadmills on the second floor. Many women usually use them. Normally when I start to work out, I first warm up and do stretching. And then I usually run on treadmills. After working out, I take a shower. Working out help me blow stress or relax mind.

1. I like to work out with my colleague Mr. yu at Top heath club near my office.  Good job on this! :-)

2. I usually work out there 3~4 times a week. Good job on this! :-)

3. 3~4 people work there. They wear uniform and They are very kind and friendly. -> 3~4 people work there. They wear uniform and they are very kind and friendly.

4. There is divided into two floors. -> The gym has two floors./ The gym is divided into two floors.

5. There are many treadmills and stationary bikes on the first floor. Good job on this :-)

6. Many men usually use them. -> Good job on this :-)
7. There are many treadmills on the second floor. -> There are many treadmills on the second floor, too.

8. Many women usually use them. Good job on this :-)

9. Normally when I start to work out, I first warm up and do stretching.  Good job on this :-)

10. And then I usually run on treadmills. Good job on this :-)
11. After working out, I take a shower. Good job on this :-)

12. Working out help me blow stress or relax mind.  Good job on this :-)

Hi!

You did a good job in composing your answers into sentences. You have improved your writing skills. There were only few grammar slips and you can also express your thoughts better. Just be careful when capitalizing the letters and widening your vocabulary would also be a good help to fully convey your thoughts.

-Lovely