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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 11. 06 조회 13330

"once in a lifetime"

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When i watched TV program "꽃보다 청춘", I really hope to visit South America once in a life time.
In this program, casts visited Peru and show me the ancient herritage. I was overwhelmed with that exostic and unrealistic scene.
튜터 교정 답변

When I watched the TV program "꽃보다 청춘", it really made me want to visit South America. I've never been to South America; I think it would be a once in a life time experience to be able to visit. In this program, the cast members visited Peru. Watching their trip to Peru exposed me to its ancient heritage. I was overwhelmed by the exotic scenery; it seemed unreal.

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