Bank
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Banks can be a best friend for living in many cases, but it would be your painful burden if you do not make a plan.
Nowadays, most of the koreans who have a house are getting pains for their debt for banks.
In the mid of 2000s years, the price of korean mortgage had grow to the rocket high every day.
And now, It is going down and the situation that the owners can't pay back to the banks about their debt come out.
Even the interest rate is very low in these days, it seems that people are reluctant to borrow more debt from banks.
If you would like to be a rich, you have to know the use of banks.
Nowadays, most of the koreans who have a house are getting pains for their debt for banks.
In the mid of 2000s years, the price of korean mortgage had grow to the rocket high every day.
And now, It is going down and the situation that the owners can't pay back to the banks about their debt come out.
Even the interest rate is very low in these days, it seems that people are reluctant to borrow more debt from banks.
If you would like to be a rich, you have to know the use of banks.
튜터 교정 답변
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