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I work at an IT company called Samsung SDS which is a leading IT company in Korea.
It was established in 1980, there are 50 branches in Korea and we have overseas branches in China, America and Middle East.
There are more than 12,000 employees working for the company.
We provide our clients with various kinds of IT service including consulting, developing and maintaining software programs and systems, to make their business successful and efficient.
Our company’s secret to success is based on customized and ultimate IT service.
That’s why we are taking major market share in IT field.
I believe Samsung SDS will be the best IT Company, not only in Korea but also in the World in near future.
It was established in 1980, there are 50 branches in Korea and we have overseas branches in China, America and Middle East.
There are more than 12,000 employees working for the company.
We provide our clients with various kinds of IT service including consulting, developing and maintaining software programs and systems, to make their business successful and efficient.
Our company’s secret to success is based on customized and ultimate IT service.
That’s why we are taking major market share in IT field.
I believe Samsung SDS will be the best IT Company, not only in Korea but also in the World in near future.
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