Traditional Holiday
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
There are two big traditional holidays in Korea. Chuseok and Lunar New Year's Day are those.
When these holidays come, the war of buying the train ticket for hometowm begin.
If you couldn't aquire the train ticket, you have to bear the traffic or to find another way to go home.
Once you make it to go home, kids are very happy to meet their cousin and to get some money from elders.
Adults are prepare a memorial for ancestors. And after the ceremony we dine together.
These days, there are also many people go travel with their family instead of going hometown.
When these holidays come, the war of buying the train ticket for hometowm begin.
If you couldn't aquire the train ticket, you have to bear the traffic or to find another way to go home.
Once you make it to go home, kids are very happy to meet their cousin and to get some money from elders.
Adults are prepare a memorial for ancestors. And after the ceremony we dine together.
These days, there are also many people go travel with their family instead of going hometown.
튜터 교정 답변
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