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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 11. 10 조회 13582

I'm sorry

작성자: 1102047524 담당 튜터: Bree
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi~ Bree Teather

I'm very sorry I missed your call.
I get up late this morning.
Fortunately, I get to work on time.
Again, I am sincerely sorry.

Have a nice day!
See you tomorrow.
튜터 교정 답변

Dear Sarah,

Good morning to you. It's okay. It's good to hear you're doing fine. Your letter is good. But let's try to make it even better.

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Hi Teacher Bree,

I'm very sorru for missing your call. I woke up late this morning. Fortunately, I made it to work on time. Once again, I'm very sorry. Have a nice day. See you tomorrow!

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Much better? I know you can make it more pertfectly next time. Have a great day.

Bree

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