Invitation to my home for cookin party
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I am really happy to meet my friends in my home than any other places. because it is more comfortable when i relax and drink with other people in my house. Especially, i love to invite intimate friends to my home to have a dinner which is cooked myself. But i reluctant to invite many people like 5~6 peoples in my home as my room space is short to capacity.
My ability for cooking is a little bad. but making some of menu such as noodle food, fried rices is very good. when i invite some people, i also love to communicate with people sitting on the sofa while we were eating something.
Recently, i am living with my family members, so it is very difficult to invite friends. That point is very sorry.
My ability for cooking is a little bad. but making some of menu such as noodle food, fried rices is very good. when i invite some people, i also love to communicate with people sitting on the sofa while we were eating something.
Recently, i am living with my family members, so it is very difficult to invite friends. That point is very sorry.
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