singing in a group
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Koreans have many excitement especially when they get together and share joyful things like a singing with karaoke.
We call the store that services karaoke as karaoke room.
I also usually enjoy going to karaoke room after drinking together. I am a person who boom up the atmosphere at the karaoke room by singing a song first with dance among colleagues.
There are some people shy at the karaoke room, but I think that karaoke room exist not for singing good but for show themselves as they are. More become stupid, more become friendly.
We call the store that services karaoke as karaoke room.
I also usually enjoy going to karaoke room after drinking together. I am a person who boom up the atmosphere at the karaoke room by singing a song first with dance among colleagues.
There are some people shy at the karaoke room, but I think that karaoke room exist not for singing good but for show themselves as they are. More become stupid, more become friendly.
튜터 교정 답변
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