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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 11. 14 조회 12481

It's Friday!

작성자: 1100048438 담당 튜터: Beth
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TGIF!
I like Friday. Of course I like weekend more.

Today's topic is what poeple to do in freetime.
Thease days, many korean try to balancing their life with work and other.
For example have a time with their family or friend.
Or exercise for health, make to / learn to something.
In my case, I like go to the watching Musical.
I saw 'Rebecca', recently. Do you konw that musical?
It's very interesting story and there are nice music and nice set the stage.
Nowadays, I'm always listening and singing the song 'Rebecca'.
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TGIF! I like Friday. Of course I like weekend more. Today's topic is what poeple to do in during their freetime. Thease These days, many Koreans try to balancing balance their life with work and other things. For example, have a time with their family or friend, or exercise for health, make to / learn to something. In my case, I like go to the watching musicals. I saw "Rebecca" recently. Do you konw know that musical? It's a very interesting story and there are nice music and nice set setting on the stage. Nowadays, I'm always listening and singing to the the song "Rebecca".

 

Hello Hana,

I haven't heard of the musical Rebecca but I'll check this out. Thank you for telling me about this. Thank you for sending me this composition.

Let's talk again tomorrow. Take care.

 

-Beth- wink

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