essay
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I think koreans are tend to be kind to western people rather than asian like japanese or chinese.
It seems that the tendency originated from our tough times with the neighbor contries historically.
But we had big helps from western countries during and after the Korean War.
Also I think koreans have a big yearn for living rich and strong like western countries even we rank the top ten trade scale in the world.
I think this yearning will be last until we overcome western countries.
It seems that the tendency originated from our tough times with the neighbor contries historically.
But we had big helps from western countries during and after the Korean War.
Also I think koreans have a big yearn for living rich and strong like western countries even we rank the top ten trade scale in the world.
I think this yearning will be last until we overcome western countries.
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