Unit 20 - Watching sports games
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I like to watch sports games on TV. When I was a child, I liked to watch basketball games in Korea league. At that time, basketball is most popular sports in Korea, so the players is very popular to girls like actors. But now, I like to watch overseas soccer games such as England, Spain, Germany. Korea soccer league is not interesting because it is too slow when they play games. Therefore whenever I watch that, I'm sleepy. In Worldcup or Olympic season, I usually stay up late at night. I want to watch Korean players, and cheer up. And I want to feel the moment that they get gold medals.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!