I had wonderful time with a girl that I like.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Yesteday, I told you that I was going to meet a girl that I like.
I met her last night. I just noticed her I will finish the work earier than usual, then
she asked me to see a movie together.
She reserved tickets and I bouht dinner for her. Actually, I am still waiting for her answer since I courted her. we are not couple yet.
But she gave me a candle that she made by herself. I was so moved. Although, she didn't answer, I could have confidence that I am still having a chance to be her boyfriend.
We watched the movie named "Non stop" starting Liam Neeson. It's too boring movie.. Don't see that movie especially with your lover.
In that time, I tried to grep her hand during the movie and then I want her to be sure we are couple from now on. But, as you know the action type of movies.. even boring action movie..
I slept during the movie..
Next time, I will court her again with great event.
I met her last night. I just noticed her I will finish the work earier than usual, then
she asked me to see a movie together.
She reserved tickets and I bouht dinner for her. Actually, I am still waiting for her answer since I courted her. we are not couple yet.
But she gave me a candle that she made by herself. I was so moved. Although, she didn't answer, I could have confidence that I am still having a chance to be her boyfriend.
We watched the movie named "Non stop" starting Liam Neeson. It's too boring movie.. Don't see that movie especially with your lover.
In that time, I tried to grep her hand during the movie and then I want her to be sure we are couple from now on. But, as you know the action type of movies.. even boring action movie..
I slept during the movie..
Next time, I will court her again with great event.
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