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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 03. 06 조회 14631

I had wonderful time with a girl that I like.

작성자: 1101093678 담당 튜터: Claudia
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Yesteday, I told you that I was going to meet a girl that I like.

I met her last night. I just noticed her I will finish the work earier than usual, then

she asked me to see a movie together.

She reserved tickets and I bouht dinner for her. Actually, I am still waiting for her answer since I courted her. we are not couple yet.

But she gave me a candle that she made by herself. I was so moved. Although, she didn't answer, I could have confidence that I am still having a chance to be her boyfriend.

We watched the movie named "Non stop" starting Liam Neeson. It's too boring movie.. Don't see that movie especially with your lover.

In that time, I tried to grep her hand during the movie and then I want her to be sure we are couple from now on. But, as you know the action type of movies.. even boring action movie..

I slept during the movie..

Next time, I will court her again with great event.
튜터 교정 답변
Yesteday, I told you that I was going to meet the girl that I like. I met her last night. I just told her I will finish the work earlier than the usual, then she asked me to see a movie together. She reserved tickets and I bought dinner for her. Actually, I am still waiting for her answer since I courted her. We are not couple yet. But she gave me a candle that she made by herself. I was so moved. Although, she didn't answer, I could have confidence that I am still having a chance to be her boyfriend. We watched the movie named "Non stop" staring Liam Neeson. It's too boring movie.. Don't see that movie especially with your lover. In that time, I tried to grip her hand during the movie and then I want her to be sure we are couple from now on. But, as you know the action type of movies.. even boring action movie.. I slept during the movie.. Next time, I will court her again with a great event. ******************************************************************************************************************* Ronaldo, You are such a funny guy. Use your sense of humor to court that girl. ^^, If you can make her laugh, then it's possible for you to make her fall in love with you. (",) I love Liam Neeson. I can't believe that you fell asleep during the movie. Haha! Well, let's talk more of that later. See you! Claudia
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