As for the affair
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Subject : As for the affair
I know that American people can have an affair with the other partner without taking legal responsibility. Regarding set aside the immoral issue.
In Korea, It is illegal that married men have a sex with another women.
You said that men should be married with more than ten women because of the lack of women's population.
But my biological opinion, it is natural that men want to have a sex with many women.
Because women have only one egg, so they can adopt only one man, but men have billions of sperm, so they have the instinct to spread their seed to many fields.
I know that American people can have an affair with the other partner without taking legal responsibility. Regarding set aside the immoral issue.
In Korea, It is illegal that married men have a sex with another women.
You said that men should be married with more than ten women because of the lack of women's population.
But my biological opinion, it is natural that men want to have a sex with many women.
Because women have only one egg, so they can adopt only one man, but men have billions of sperm, so they have the instinct to spread their seed to many fields.
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