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Introduce myself.

작성자: 1100048438 담당 튜터: Beth
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My name is HANA.
I think my name is international.
Many korean pepole have English name. Because their korean name is so difficult prononcation.
But my name is easy. So I can use my own name in all contiries.
My name means 'Only', 'No. 1' in Korea and 'Flower' in Japanese.
It's good, isn't it? I like it.

I'm in my early 30's. I'm 31 years old.
The age is not early and not late thant start something.
If you have nothing, it's late to start.
Other people already have their know-how.
But if you have somthing(money, career, etc), it's early to start.
Everything is not enough and can't throw their way for other way.
It's my concern these days.
I know no correct answer in life.
I want to find my own answer.
Please, cross your fingers for me.
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My name is HANA. I think my name is common. international. Many Korean pepole people have English names because their Korean name is so difficult to pronounce. prononcation. But my name is easy so I can use my own name in all countries. contiries. My name means "only one"' in Korea and 'Flower' in Japanese. It's good, isn't it? I like it. I'm in my early 30's. I'm 31 years old. The age is not too early and not too late thant to start something. If you have nothing, it's too late to start. Other people already have their know-how. But if you have somthing something(money, career, etc), it's early to start. Everything is not enough and can't throw their way for another. other way. It's my concern these days. I don't know the no correct answer in life. I want to find my own answer. Please, cross your fingers for me.

 

Hello Hana, laugh

I guess everybody experience the same dilemma you are in. They think that they don't have enough time to start something because they lack resources like time and money. It is true that

finding the right answer is difficult but you learn many things along the way. Just keep moving forward and the right path will open for you. I always wish you all the best of course.

Thank you for sending me this composition, I had fun reading and also you made me re-think of my choices in life. It was a great help.

Let's meet again tomorrow, okay? Take care.

 

-Beth-  ^_^

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