Introduce myself.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My name is HANA.
I think my name is international.
Many korean pepole have English name. Because their korean name is so difficult prononcation.
But my name is easy. So I can use my own name in all contiries.
My name means 'Only', 'No. 1' in Korea and 'Flower' in Japanese.
It's good, isn't it? I like it.
I'm in my early 30's. I'm 31 years old.
The age is not early and not late thant start something.
If you have nothing, it's late to start.
Other people already have their know-how.
But if you have somthing(money, career, etc), it's early to start.
Everything is not enough and can't throw their way for other way.
It's my concern these days.
I know no correct answer in life.
I want to find my own answer.
Please, cross your fingers for me.
I think my name is international.
Many korean pepole have English name. Because their korean name is so difficult prononcation.
But my name is easy. So I can use my own name in all contiries.
My name means 'Only', 'No. 1' in Korea and 'Flower' in Japanese.
It's good, isn't it? I like it.
I'm in my early 30's. I'm 31 years old.
The age is not early and not late thant start something.
If you have nothing, it's late to start.
Other people already have their know-how.
But if you have somthing(money, career, etc), it's early to start.
Everything is not enough and can't throw their way for other way.
It's my concern these days.
I know no correct answer in life.
I want to find my own answer.
Please, cross your fingers for me.
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