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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 11. 24 조회 12391

Playing a tennis is so fun!

작성자: 1101863214 담당 튜터: Wynston2
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i'd love to play a tennis with my friend when i have a free time. 8 years ago, i had learned tennis from my university's class. Duration learning tennis is 6 months. At first time, it was very difficult to learn. especially serve form. after all, i got a A Plus score at that semester.

after that, i really like to play tennis when i need to move my body physically. but as tennis is outdoor game, that is closely affected by weather. if it is raining, we should stop the game reluctantly.
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I'd love to play a tennis with my friend when I have a free time. 8 years ago, i I had learned tennis from my university's class. Duration learning tennis is 6 months. At first time, it was very difficult to learn. especially serve form. after all, i got a A Plus score at that semester. after that, i really like to play tennis when i need to move my body physically. but as tennis is outdoor game, that is closely affected by weather. if it is raining, we should stop the game reluctantly.

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