Unit 23. Playing a Game
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, Sandy!
Please check my script below.
Question:
In your survey, you indicated that you enjoy playing games. What is the name of the game you play? Why and how do you play the game?
My Answer:
I enjoy playing strategy games the most, especially lord of knights is the best. It is mobile game.
Since it is a multiplayer game, I can play it with my friends.
Thus, I feel like I’m hanging out with them even though I’m alone.
When I play the game, I get very excited. In this game, you need to choose the best strategy for win, and order to an attack by the enemy.
The best favorite thing is that it can play anywhere anytime.
Please check my script below.
Question:
In your survey, you indicated that you enjoy playing games. What is the name of the game you play? Why and how do you play the game?
My Answer:
I enjoy playing strategy games the most, especially lord of knights is the best. It is mobile game.
Since it is a multiplayer game, I can play it with my friends.
Thus, I feel like I’m hanging out with them even though I’m alone.
When I play the game, I get very excited. In this game, you need to choose the best strategy for win, and order to an attack by the enemy.
The best favorite thing is that it can play anywhere anytime.
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