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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I like traveling domestically.
When I go on a trip, I first search some information on the Internet instead of travel agencies.
There are a lot of traveling websites or blogs that people recorded their travel by themselves.
There are much enough information such as ticket fee, famous food, how to get there, or accommodations.
Some bloggers post their itinerary in details.
Traveling beginners don’t need to worry about traveling.
You just have to travel with the itinerary so you can get good travel.
If you are planning a trip, you must visit travel blogs.
When I go on a trip, I first search some information on the Internet instead of travel agencies.
There are a lot of traveling websites or blogs that people recorded their travel by themselves.
There are much enough information such as ticket fee, famous food, how to get there, or accommodations.
Some bloggers post their itinerary in details.
Traveling beginners don’t need to worry about traveling.
You just have to travel with the itinerary so you can get good travel.
If you are planning a trip, you must visit travel blogs.
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