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The blog I like the most is "English Speaking through Radio"
This blog deal with the good method that people first start English Speaking with Radio Broadcast.
A bloger always post today's topic of Radio textbook to help other people to study English.
She easily explain the education contents to other people and she usually write the experience she did.
I study English to refer to the blog at all times and then I listen to Radio lecture.
The blog help me to study easily and comfortablely.
I can get access to the blog all over the place.
If I am good English speaker, I hope operating the English blog I made.
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The blog I like the most is "English Speaking through Radio" This blog deal with the good method that people first start English Speaking with Radio Broadcast. A bloger always post today's topic of Radio textbook to help other people to study English. She easily explain the education contents to other people and she usually write the experience she did. I study English to refer to the blog at all times and then I listen to Radio lecture. The blog help me to study easily and comfortablely. I can get access to the blog all over the place. If I am good English speaker, I hope operating the English blog I made.

1. The blog I like the most is "English Speaking through Radio" -> The blog I like the most is "English Speaking through Radio."

2. This blog deal with the good method that people first start English Speaking with Radio Broadcast. -> This blog deals with the good method that people first start English Speaking with Radio Broadcast.

3. A bloger always post today's topic of Radio textbook to help other people to study English.  ->A blogger always post today's topic of Radio textbook to help other people to study English.

4.  She easily explain the education contents to other people and she usually write the experience she did. -> She easily explains the education contents to other people and she usually writes the experience she had.

5. I study English to refer to the blog at all times and then I listen to Radio lecture. ->   Whenever I study English, I refer to the blog at all times and then I listen to Radio lecture.

6. The blog help me to study easily and comfortablely. -> The blog helps me to study easily and comfortablely.

7. I can get access to the blog all over the place. -> GOOD JOB! smiley

8. If I am good English speaker, I hope operating the English blog I made. -> If I were a good English speaker, I hope to operate an English blog I made.

Hi Kent!

Kudos! You did  a good job in imparting your knowledge and experience regarding this topic. Jsut be careful with the verb tenses and verb forms. Other than that, you did a good job! Keep up the good work! :)

-Lovely

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