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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 03. 06 조회 11981

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작성자: 1100980399 담당 튜터: Elizabeth2
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학생 제출 원문
I work at Samsung SDS. It is major of IT company and 1st in korea. A number of staff is about 15000. Office is in many place. Our office is located in suwon. Our company set up computing system like MES, ERP, Public system and develop software like web program, mobile program and so force. I am programer for MES system. We process not only domistic project but also global project. So somtimes I go to abroad for business trip. Everyday almost I am busy and I have a lot of to do. I enjoy working for this company. but somtimes I want to have vacation during a few day.
튜터 교정 답변
I work at Samsung SDS. It is a major IT company and #1 in Korea. About 15,000 people work at my company. There are offices/branches all over Korea. Our office is located in Suwon. Our company sets up computing systems like MES, ERP, and public systems and develops software like web programs, mobile programs and so forth. I am a programmer for the MES system. We process not only domestic projects but also global ones. So sometimes I go abroad for business trips. Almost everyday I am busy and I have a lot to do! I enjoy working for this company but sometimes I would like a vacation for a few days. Great job with this Jay! I made some corrections here. Let me know if you have any questions! -Teacher Elizabeth
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