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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
10 years ago, I liked to take pictures
So I often travel domestically by myself at that time
and I took pictures of flowers, trees, mountains, ocean and so on.
My all pictures was saved in my laptop.
My coworker saw my pictures in details and recommand me to post my pictures to the blog.
so I surffed about Gallery for pictures.
Many koreans made and operated the own their blog.
Some people had heavy activities and had many guest.
I decided to make my blog to post my pictures.
since then I have operated my blog and have posted my pictures.
These day, blogs help me to find things i want such as food, traveling, famous spot and so on
So I often travel domestically by myself at that time
and I took pictures of flowers, trees, mountains, ocean and so on.
My all pictures was saved in my laptop.
My coworker saw my pictures in details and recommand me to post my pictures to the blog.
so I surffed about Gallery for pictures.
Many koreans made and operated the own their blog.
Some people had heavy activities and had many guest.
I decided to make my blog to post my pictures.
since then I have operated my blog and have posted my pictures.
These day, blogs help me to find things i want such as food, traveling, famous spot and so on
튜터 교정 답변
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