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I live in the suburbs of a large city called Seoul which is capital city of Korea.
It's fairly new residential city, so it's quite clean and quiet
There are many apartment complexes in the area.
What i like the most about my city is that I can take care of almost everything here.
There are banks, discount stores, departement stores, movie theaters, and plenty of places to eat or drink in the central area.
All citizen can easily go there by foot.
There are many parks people can go to as well.
It's quite easy to get around as we have subway and local buses.
Parents like this city because there are good schools in the district.
I like my neighborhood as there are a lot of forest i can jog or hike.
I don't want to leave my area forever.
It's fairly new residential city, so it's quite clean and quiet
There are many apartment complexes in the area.
What i like the most about my city is that I can take care of almost everything here.
There are banks, discount stores, departement stores, movie theaters, and plenty of places to eat or drink in the central area.
All citizen can easily go there by foot.
There are many parks people can go to as well.
It's quite easy to get around as we have subway and local buses.
Parents like this city because there are good schools in the district.
I like my neighborhood as there are a lot of forest i can jog or hike.
I don't want to leave my area forever.
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