Which website do you visit the most and why?
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As I mentioned above, I absolutely enjoy surfing the internet.
So there are many websites which is visit ofen.
Among them my favorit and most frequently visiting web site is Google and Naver.
Google is the most famous site in the world, on the othe hand Naver is very popular in Korea.
Both of them are search engine, but there are some differneces between these two site.
And actualy, these differences are the reason why I use both of these two sarch engine.
In the case of Google, the initial screen is very simple.
There is only one searching box.
On the contrary, in the case of Naver, there are many contens, for exsample search box, News, retrieval ranking, blog, cafe, on so on.
In the case of I have some free time, and want to kill time checking social issues or
finding someting interesting, I use Naver.
And in the case of I can'n satisfied by the searching results by one site, I visit the other site too.
So there are many websites which is visit ofen.
Among them my favorit and most frequently visiting web site is Google and Naver.
Google is the most famous site in the world, on the othe hand Naver is very popular in Korea.
Both of them are search engine, but there are some differneces between these two site.
And actualy, these differences are the reason why I use both of these two sarch engine.
In the case of Google, the initial screen is very simple.
There is only one searching box.
On the contrary, in the case of Naver, there are many contens, for exsample search box, News, retrieval ranking, blog, cafe, on so on.
In the case of I have some free time, and want to kill time checking social issues or
finding someting interesting, I use Naver.
And in the case of I can'n satisfied by the searching results by one site, I visit the other site too.
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