Lunch
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
- with whom?
I usually go with 4 to 6 colleagues during lunch time on weekday.
I believe that it is importanto to have a meal with them for sharing some ideas about business. Through that experience, I've been able to communicate with others better. According to recent news report, it would be one of essential factors to increase the level of closeness within office.
- when?
The company limits lunch time from 11:30 to 12:30, so the officers have only 1 hour for it.
That's why we go to restaurants around work place.
I usually go with 4 to 6 colleagues during lunch time on weekday.
I believe that it is importanto to have a meal with them for sharing some ideas about business. Through that experience, I've been able to communicate with others better. According to recent news report, it would be one of essential factors to increase the level of closeness within office.
- when?
The company limits lunch time from 11:30 to 12:30, so the officers have only 1 hour for it.
That's why we go to restaurants around work place.
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