hobby
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hobby 12/09
hello good morning how are you?
today is not same as usual and something happened to me which make me confused.
my company was reorganized and many supervisor went out of company.
there are some of supervisors who I have worked with together for several years.
I'm sorry about that
before it said to employee , there so many rumors and i think we might enjoy rumors and worry about our future.
i figure i'm distracted for while. beacause my supervisor and some coworkers may be going to move other department or i might have to move other department.
that's it.
i wanna talk about hobby
what is your hobby?
my hobby is to make simple furniture or something for myself
do you know DIY? in other words, do it yourself
I like to do something myself and I'm interested in home interior, furniture and architecture. someday I wanna build my house in jeuju island
do you know jeju island? I think it is one of famous and beautiful island in the world.
if you have chance to visit our country, I recommend you to visit that jeuju island.
anyway actually many men like making something but they don't be interested in home interior.
hello good morning how are you?
today is not same as usual and something happened to me which make me confused.
my company was reorganized and many supervisor went out of company.
there are some of supervisors who I have worked with together for several years.
I'm sorry about that
before it said to employee , there so many rumors and i think we might enjoy rumors and worry about our future.
i figure i'm distracted for while. beacause my supervisor and some coworkers may be going to move other department or i might have to move other department.
that's it.
i wanna talk about hobby
what is your hobby?
my hobby is to make simple furniture or something for myself
do you know DIY? in other words, do it yourself
I like to do something myself and I'm interested in home interior, furniture and architecture. someday I wanna build my house in jeuju island
do you know jeju island? I think it is one of famous and beautiful island in the world.
if you have chance to visit our country, I recommend you to visit that jeuju island.
anyway actually many men like making something but they don't be interested in home interior.
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