My Project
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The Project I worked on Last year was making web site.
I was a project leader. to success the project, I had to have many meetings and work over time.
when we started the project, we gathered the Voice of customers. and we analyzed the process of client's work flow and deliveried the information to programmer.
The project was progreessed satisfactorily, so after 5 months, we earned the good result.
The clients satisfied themselves. The web site give faster, simplier and more comvenient service to the users.
As a result, the clients give us the other project. so we are happy to achieve recognition.
I was a project leader. to success the project, I had to have many meetings and work over time.
when we started the project, we gathered the Voice of customers. and we analyzed the process of client's work flow and deliveried the information to programmer.
The project was progreessed satisfactorily, so after 5 months, we earned the good result.
The clients satisfied themselves. The web site give faster, simplier and more comvenient service to the users.
As a result, the clients give us the other project. so we are happy to achieve recognition.
튜터 교정 답변
Correction 
The project that I worked on last year was to make a website. I was the project leader. For the project to be successful I had to attend a lot of meetings and worked late. When we started the project, we gathered the voice of the customers and we analyzed the process of client's work flow and delivered the information to the programmer. The project went well and after 5 months, we earned the good result. The clients were very satisfied. The website gives faster, simpler and more convenient service to the users. As a result, the clients gave us another project so we are happy to achieve recognition.
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