Hi emily Good morning
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi emily Good morning
It has even snowing since this afternoon.
And it is friday.
Do you have plan on weekend?
I just want to rest at my home because it was hard week for me.
We have to finish project in 3 weeks and give a presentation to supervisor.
I think my family does not like it.
Yesterday we talked about hiking with you.
Do you remember that?
I hiked 태백 mountain with my family at the last day of 2013 to celebrate new year.
The mountain is located in kangwon-do of korea and it is holly mountain to korean.
Our ancestor preyed at the mountain.
My coworker said that it is no t hard for children to hike the mountain.
I believed that
That day was very cold and windy day. We put on heavy winter clothes and hat to protect from cold and wind.
It takes about 2 hours for man to arrive at the peak of the mountain.
But my son he was only 9 years old. He looked cold and hard during the hiking.
After 30 minutes since we started hiking, He want to stop hiking and go down.
So I persuaded him to go to the peak.
I said if you succeed to go to the peak. I would buy you la-myoun.
La-meon is a korean instant noodle. It is my son's best favorite food.
Usually I and my Wife don't give him for his health.
Finally He arrived at the peak. We were very happy except my son.
I hope that it should be good memory someday.
Snowed Mountain was very impressive at me.
I wanted to hike agin when winter come in this year.
It has even snowing since this afternoon.
And it is friday.
Do you have plan on weekend?
I just want to rest at my home because it was hard week for me.
We have to finish project in 3 weeks and give a presentation to supervisor.
I think my family does not like it.
Yesterday we talked about hiking with you.
Do you remember that?
I hiked 태백 mountain with my family at the last day of 2013 to celebrate new year.
The mountain is located in kangwon-do of korea and it is holly mountain to korean.
Our ancestor preyed at the mountain.
My coworker said that it is no t hard for children to hike the mountain.
I believed that
That day was very cold and windy day. We put on heavy winter clothes and hat to protect from cold and wind.
It takes about 2 hours for man to arrive at the peak of the mountain.
But my son he was only 9 years old. He looked cold and hard during the hiking.
After 30 minutes since we started hiking, He want to stop hiking and go down.
So I persuaded him to go to the peak.
I said if you succeed to go to the peak. I would buy you la-myoun.
La-meon is a korean instant noodle. It is my son's best favorite food.
Usually I and my Wife don't give him for his health.
Finally He arrived at the peak. We were very happy except my son.
I hope that it should be good memory someday.
Snowed Mountain was very impressive at me.
I wanted to hike agin when winter come in this year.
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