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Unit 27 - Basketball

작성자: HWMC201200797 담당 튜터: Wynston2
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I played basketball when I was a student. At that time, my friend and I played basketball in school playground. Korean students usually are stressed by test score, so they solve the stresses by playing sports with friends. These days I watch basketball on TV broadcast once a week. I don't like basketball much, but when I have a spare time, I sometimes watch it. But I don't have a experience that I go to the stadium. There is no basketball stadium in my city.
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I played basketball when I was a student. At that time, my friend and I played basketball in THE school playground. Korean students usually are stressed by test scoreS, so they solve the stresses by playing sports with friends. These days I watch basketball on TV broadcast once a week. I don't like basketball much, but when I have a spare time, I sometimes watch it SOMETIMES. But HOWEVER, I don't have aNY experience that I go to the stadiumS. There is no basketball stadium in my city.

 

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