Chatting on a phone
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Chatting on a phone
In general, I do not chat on a phone, especially in case the other side is a man.
Every night at 10:30 pm, I usually talk with my girlfriend.
She is very talkative, and her story is mostly fun.
But sometimes I wish that she would not call me at that time when I felt tired.
Anyway, we talk a lot and get along with well.
A few days ago, we talked about this story.
I wrote a reply on her blog article about The Swan Lake we watched last weekend.
And after a few minutes, her friend replied on my reply. I didn't see her before, but I happily
answered to her reply. After another few minutes, the friend replied on my answer, and her
comment really depressed me. I thought she was a person who is not carefulness and ill-mannered.
I deleted all of my replys on my girlfriend's blog to be not to face with this kind of person.
My girlfriend said that she is a person kind of a little bit out of normal.
In general, I do not chat on a phone, especially in case the other side is a man.
Every night at 10:30 pm, I usually talk with my girlfriend.
She is very talkative, and her story is mostly fun.
But sometimes I wish that she would not call me at that time when I felt tired.
Anyway, we talk a lot and get along with well.
A few days ago, we talked about this story.
I wrote a reply on her blog article about The Swan Lake we watched last weekend.
And after a few minutes, her friend replied on my reply. I didn't see her before, but I happily
answered to her reply. After another few minutes, the friend replied on my answer, and her
comment really depressed me. I thought she was a person who is not carefulness and ill-mannered.
I deleted all of my replys on my girlfriend's blog to be not to face with this kind of person.
My girlfriend said that she is a person kind of a little bit out of normal.
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