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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 12. 18 조회 12915

Special Memory

작성자: 119846 담당 튜터: Jasmine1
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I heard that your soon-to-be husband came from Morocco. He has not been to the States ever. You've met him during your stay for studing in Germany like the movie 'Before Sunrise'. And you two have fell in love each other and are supposed to marry soon. Even He can't speak english very well. I can imagine how deep is your love.
I have a similer story to your's. When I was a manager of this company's tennis club, I went to the tennis store where we had deals often. When the string of my racket was changing, the door opened and a girl came in. I was shocked with her appearance at the moment. Because I didn't see such a beautiful girl before. And I helped her shopping in the store because she couldn't speak in Korean. She was a flight attendant of Air China, and she was scheduled from Seoul to Beijing daily.
Because At that time was a Christmas season, there were many things to see on the street and I gave her a sightseeing Seoul.
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I heard that your soon-to-be husband came from Morocco. He has not been to the States ever. You've met him during your stay for studing in Germany like the movie 'Before Sunrise'. And you two have fallin fell in love with each other and are supposed to marry soon even though he can't speak English very well. I can imagine how deep is your love is. I have a similer story to yours. When I was a manager of this company's tennis club, I went to the tennis store where we had deals often. When the strings of my racket were being changed was changing, the door opened and a girl came in. I was shocked by with her appearance at the moment because I hadn't seen didn't such a beautiful girl before. And I helped her shopping in the store because she couldn't speak in Korean. She was a flight attendant of Air China, and she was scheduled from Seoul to Beijing daily. Because at that time was a Christmas season, there were many things to see on the street and I gave her a sightseeing Seoul.

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