Escape from IKEA
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I went to IKEA store located in Gwang-Myoung city which is thirty minutes drive distance from my house on weekend.
IKEA opened their first store in Korea last thursday, and It was issued all around country.
When we managed to arrive at the store, there were a big wave of thounsands of people in line to enter into the store, furthermore it starts snow.
My girlfriend and I was standing in line outside of the store for an hour. Finally we entered the store, and bumped here and there with shoulder to shoulder. I felt a little fatigue, and wanted to get out of this place, but the store was too huge to find the exit. We managed to escape from the holocaust and went to the food court and found out the food was so cheap. But there was a long line to another holocaust. We stopped our 'Mission to IKEA', and we went to a really delicious sashimi restaurant.
IKEA opened their first store in Korea last thursday, and It was issued all around country.
When we managed to arrive at the store, there were a big wave of thounsands of people in line to enter into the store, furthermore it starts snow.
My girlfriend and I was standing in line outside of the store for an hour. Finally we entered the store, and bumped here and there with shoulder to shoulder. I felt a little fatigue, and wanted to get out of this place, but the store was too huge to find the exit. We managed to escape from the holocaust and went to the food court and found out the food was so cheap. But there was a long line to another holocaust. We stopped our 'Mission to IKEA', and we went to a really delicious sashimi restaurant.
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