SNS
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SNS - Social Network Service
I want to talk about SNS such as Facebook, Twitter and Pinterset.
There are a lot of SNS in the world. I think Twitter and Facebook is the most famous SNS.
Facebook has more popular and been getting people than twitter.
Everyday I check Facebook and Twitter.
I prefer reading to writing.
That's because I don't like other people see what I 'am doing and what I'am eating.
I don't think media such as news paper, televison news might always tell the truth.
Media of Our country tell a lie more often than your country.
I believe what twitter said is more near truth than what media said.
I rarely read newspaper and television news.
I have no television at my home
In 2011, twitter and Facebooks credited with role in toppling Egypt's Mubarak.
I want to talk about SNS such as Facebook, Twitter and Pinterset.
There are a lot of SNS in the world. I think Twitter and Facebook is the most famous SNS.
Facebook has more popular and been getting people than twitter.
Everyday I check Facebook and Twitter.
I prefer reading to writing.
That's because I don't like other people see what I 'am doing and what I'am eating.
I don't think media such as news paper, televison news might always tell the truth.
Media of Our country tell a lie more often than your country.
I believe what twitter said is more near truth than what media said.
I rarely read newspaper and television news.
I have no television at my home
In 2011, twitter and Facebooks credited with role in toppling Egypt's Mubarak.
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