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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 12. 29 조회 13190

Christmas Holidays

작성자: 119846 담당 튜터: Jasmine1
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I took vacation from Thursday to Sunday. I was dating with my girlfriend at Myeong-dong where is famous for foreign tourists. Myeong-dong is a street where people can go shopping and enjoy various delicious foods. And we watched movie named 'Darling, don't cross the river'. It was a documentary movie about old couple. They loved each other deeply even they was 89 and 98 years old.
But the grandpa crossed the river with the grandma left behind. Here, the river means the death.
The movie was a really tearjerker. I went to the movie again with my mom.
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I took vacation from Thursday to Sunday. I went on a date was dating with my girlfriend at in Myeong-dong which where is famous for foreign tourists. Myeong-dong is a street where people can go shopping and enjoy various delicious foods. And we watched a movie named 'Darling, don't cross the river'. It was a documentary movie about an old couple. They loved each other deeply even they were was 89 and 98 years old. But the grandpa crossed the river with the grandma left behind. Here, the river means the death. The movie was really a tearjerker. I went to the movie again with my mom.

That movie sounds lovely. I bet your mom loved watching it with you.

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