Christmas Holidays
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I took vacation from Thursday to Sunday. I was dating with my girlfriend at Myeong-dong where is famous for foreign tourists. Myeong-dong is a street where people can go shopping and enjoy various delicious foods. And we watched movie named 'Darling, don't cross the river'. It was a documentary movie about old couple. They loved each other deeply even they was 89 and 98 years old.
But the grandpa crossed the river with the grandma left behind. Here, the river means the death.
The movie was a really tearjerker. I went to the movie again with my mom.
But the grandpa crossed the river with the grandma left behind. Here, the river means the death.
The movie was a really tearjerker. I went to the movie again with my mom.
튜터 교정 답변
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