Self Introduction
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Nice to meet you.
My name is Sang hun Im, and my english name is Clark.
I Married last year, and I don't have any children yet.
I work for Samsung SDS, and I have been working for 7 years.
My job is Technical architect, so called TA. It's very interesting job.
My hobby is watching movies. I like watching movies with my wife on weekend.
We like independent movies which is not so famous.
P.S This morning, I said ' I went Ever-land.' and you didn't know what it is.
At that time, I didn't know the word 'amusement park'.
Ever-land is the biggest amusement part in korea. :)
My name is Sang hun Im, and my english name is Clark.
I Married last year, and I don't have any children yet.
I work for Samsung SDS, and I have been working for 7 years.
My job is Technical architect, so called TA. It's very interesting job.
My hobby is watching movies. I like watching movies with my wife on weekend.
We like independent movies which is not so famous.
P.S This morning, I said ' I went Ever-land.' and you didn't know what it is.
At that time, I didn't know the word 'amusement park'.
Ever-land is the biggest amusement part in korea. :)
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