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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 01. 05 조회 13852

unit 33 please take me to this address

작성자: 1100834482 담당 튜터: Wynston2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. address
- my wife took me to high level in mental part during marriage life

2. express
- i don't like to use expresstrain because of expensive fee compared to bus

3. downtown
- there are a lot of merchandises to increae people's welfare in downdwon store

4. fastest
- the fastest land animal in the world is the cheetah

5. bit
- it is a little bit hot outside

6. dirve
- my wife would drive my son to his school whenever he got up late

7. thrill

- if some people can a lof of thing in short time, there will be occured lots of thrills

8. ride
- rideing the roller coaster usually makes people feel thrills
튜터 교정 답변

1. address - my wife took me to high level in mental part during marriage life (YOU DID NOT APPLY THE WORD, "ADDRESS" IN THIS SENTENCE)

2. express - i I don't like to use express trainS because of expensive feeS compared to bus FARES

3. downtown -Tthere are a lot of merchandises to increaSe people's welfare in downdwon store

4. fastest - The fastest land animal in the world is the cheetah

5. bit - It is a little bit hot outside

6. dirve - My wife would drive my son to his school whenever he got GETS up late

7. thrill - If some people can a lof of thing in short time, there will be occured lots of thrills (I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS STATEMENT)

8. ride - rideing RIDING the roller coasterS usually makes people feel thrills DOWN THEIR SPINE

 

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