Favorite Movie Theater
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My favorite movie theater is Lotte Cinema which is in the 7th floor of Lotte department store in Incheon.
When you enter there, you can see the main lobby, box office and snack bar where I buy some snacks like popcorn and coke.
There is always a long line of people at the snack bar.
Inside the screening, the first thing you will find is a big screen and surround sound makes the sound much more realistic.
So it takes people deeper into the movie's world.
Each screen can accommodate approximately two hundred people.
After the movie, we can go to the food court within the cinema building to have a meal.
That's all. Thank you.
When you enter there, you can see the main lobby, box office and snack bar where I buy some snacks like popcorn and coke.
There is always a long line of people at the snack bar.
Inside the screening, the first thing you will find is a big screen and surround sound makes the sound much more realistic.
So it takes people deeper into the movie's world.
Each screen can accommodate approximately two hundred people.
After the movie, we can go to the food court within the cinema building to have a meal.
That's all. Thank you.
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