UNIT 3 JOB
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello, Yes I have a job
I have worked in management a network system
My main role is to check a system and setup a system and make a daily report to send many customers
I really stiesfy my job because my company gives me many money and many welfare benefactions
such as, free 10 movie tickets and health.
I have worked in management a network system
My main role is to check a system and setup a system and make a daily report to send many customers
I really stiesfy my job because my company gives me many money and many welfare benefactions
such as, free 10 movie tickets and health.
튜터 교정 답변
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