Parents
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My appearance look like my father. But my characters are look like my mother.
Nowadays I feel I love my mother than before. When I was young I fought a lot with my mother.
But now I talk a lot with mom, and I give many hug to her.
It seems that because I realized and really thanked to my mother's love, as I am getting old.
I didn't have many talks with my father. Because he did not talk a lot.
But I know he's love also. When I was in the army service at the front base to North Korea, he visited our camp on weekends at least once a month with delicious and healthy foods made in home.
Nowadays I feel I love my mother than before. When I was young I fought a lot with my mother.
But now I talk a lot with mom, and I give many hug to her.
It seems that because I realized and really thanked to my mother's love, as I am getting old.
I didn't have many talks with my father. Because he did not talk a lot.
But I know he's love also. When I was in the army service at the front base to North Korea, he visited our camp on weekends at least once a month with delicious and healthy foods made in home.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!