Shopping
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학생 제출 원문
My favorite place to shop is Pyongchun Lotte department store near by my home. It takes 10 minete to go there from my house. There are so many clothing, accessory, food, equipment to maintaining house whole, and so on.
Usually, I go there with my family. We enjoy to see so many things that is displayed many store and eat delicious food to served food squre in department store. And it is so convience to see the movie in there because Lotte Cinema is on 10 floor in there. Our family go shopping twice or third times a month. and we enjoy good time.
Usually, I go there with my family. We enjoy to see so many things that is displayed many store and eat delicious food to served food squre in department store. And it is so convience to see the movie in there because Lotte Cinema is on 10 floor in there. Our family go shopping twice or third times a month. and we enjoy good time.
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