Tiger parenting
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
In these days in Korea, married couples do not have many children. They have only one or two kids. So they try to give a lot of things to their children. They give their children good education, and sufficient items what the kids want. But It seems they do not concern about giving manners to their children. I know kids are very cute, active, and unpreditable, but I think it is a parent's duty to watch carefully their kids especially in public for safty and not to disturb other people.
튜터 교정 답변
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