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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 01. 09 조회 13452

About Shopping

작성자: 1100438910 담당 튜터: Wynston1
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I usually go shopping woth my wife.
There is a huge outlet near our house which has many clothes and shoes in it.
After shopping, we have meal there. There are many inexpensive food also.
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I usually go shopping woth WITH my wife. There is a huge outlet STORE near our house which has many SELLS CLOTHING clothes and shoes. in it. After shopping, we have A meal there.  MUCH OF THE FOOD THERE IS There are many inexpensive! food also.

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