World News #1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I saw news about terror in France last night. Terrorists attacked a media company and killed around 12 people. The media company has wrote articles about making fun of Islam. The victims include cartoon journalist who draw cartoons depreciate Muhammad. The opinions on the terror has been rose on the internet board. Most of the opinion is that it is excessive and that should not be happened, even though the media lampooned their religion.
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