World News #2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
CES has opened in America. World's high tech companies show off their technologies in this world's biggest high tech expo. The thing that caught my eyes was the flying dron. Dron is a flying machine that can be controlled by wireless controller. It was developed 5 years ago by Amazon. Now it can deliver emergency kits to the accident places, or it can be flied to observe traffic jam on the road. But in Korea, people concern the misuse of drons as for the privacy.
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