Sorry about my absent!!
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Hi
This is Choi.
First of all, I am sorry about the absent for our last Friday class.
At that time, I got very important time with my wife.
Nowdays, My wife is spending tough time. I don't know the reason exactly,
but I think it has been caused by me.
Therefor, I had to hlep her through some kind of counselling.
Last Friday, My wife and I visited leaders of our group that based on our church.
My wife and I had a precious time. Though We couldn't clear up, but We knew the reason about her tough time and also knew the method that to overcome the problem.
And Now, I am trying to think what to do for my wife and for our family.
Thank you for reading and I'm waiting your call tonight.
Bye..
This is Choi.
First of all, I am sorry about the absent for our last Friday class.
At that time, I got very important time with my wife.
Nowdays, My wife is spending tough time. I don't know the reason exactly,
but I think it has been caused by me.
Therefor, I had to hlep her through some kind of counselling.
Last Friday, My wife and I visited leaders of our group that based on our church.
My wife and I had a precious time. Though We couldn't clear up, but We knew the reason about her tough time and also knew the method that to overcome the problem.
And Now, I am trying to think what to do for my wife and for our family.
Thank you for reading and I'm waiting your call tonight.
Bye..
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